#1
This is a song that I wrote a while back. I'm not sure if I ever posted it on here, so I figured, "Meh, I'll just post it..." So here it is. I have a few other pieces that I've finished or gotten to the finishing stages, that I'll post as soon as the rules allow.

Also, the title is still in the works.


>Verse 1
I'm the dirty hypocrite who’s going to smash your head
Wait until I turn around and suddenly you're dead
I can't explain these thoughts, but I know that they're real
Do you, of all people understand how I feel?

>Whisper
...In my dirty mind...

>Chorus
I want to see you bleed
I want to make you fall
I want to hear you -
Call out my name!
I want to see the tears on your face
As you realize- that I will be the death of you!

>Verse 2
All the world is dying and you couldn't care less
This widespread destruction, I truly must stress
My throat is sore from screaming the words
That your corporate machine has distorted and blurred

>Whisper
...With your dirty lies...

>Chorus
(Because)I want to see you bleed
I want to make you fall
I want to hear you -
Call out my name!
I want to see the tears on your face
As you realize- that I will be the death of you!

>Verse 3
My depression deepens with no sun left shine
Must I always follow this destructive line?
Will it lead toward a salvation or further distress?
This is something of which you couldn't care less...

(Fade)

>Outro (Spoken/Whispered)
This aint something new
It's a continuation
A modernization of reality
Now old is new again

EDIT: I changed a few lines for spelling correctness and to make it the same as my original that I hand wrote.

check out all they videos on youtube
they dead serious about thuggin like that
if you ask me they are fruity
an i hope one morning they drown in there fruit loops
Last edited by Wasted Bassist at Feb 7, 2008,
#3
Womanbeaterish?? Could you elaborate on that?

check out all they videos on youtube
they dead serious about thuggin like that
if you ask me they are fruity
an i hope one morning they drown in there fruit loops
#4
well, I was jking but it kinda sounds like you want to kill your gf... or someone
#5
i guess its bc the call out my name part, although that doesn't mean it's your significant other, thats the way i orig. took it