#1
It's a metaphor, fool. OTS. C4C.

Cand Sastle
A meticulously crafted castle stands
On the sleepy shores of an unrelenting deadline.
Each grain masterfully laid by the craftsman's hands,
Spiraling towards the shallow skyline,
But ultimately falling as the unforgiving tides rise.
#2
Very melodic and what not, makes you think...
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#3
I really liked this. Very much so. I can't muster up a proper crit right now, but I just thought I'd tell you I couldn't really fault it. Beautiful word choice 'spiralling towards a shallow skyline'. Just great.

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