Im kind of in a love hate relationship with this song at the moment. Im using diffrent settings then normal so please give me some feedback on the tone and song itself.

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Last edited by chaseNbadguys at Feb 8, 2008,
Sounds good.

Oh, and you never answered my PM
When you saw me sleeping
thought I was dreaming
of you...

I didn't tell you
That the only dream
Is Valium for me
i think the guitars sound a bit repetitive.
the backing is perfect tho imo..

"The mind is its own place, and in itself

Can make a Heav'n of Hell, a Hell of Heav'n"

- John Milton, Paradise Lost
I think the guitars could use a little more high mid and treble, I found them a little too muddy. Love the riff though man, cool stuff.

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i like it. i agree with some of the above statements, a bit repetitive. i liked your chorus tone a lot. one thing i might say i think would sound cool is if you made the chorus sound deeper and more resonant the second time it switches. i think it would give it a cool dynamic.

one of the best things about the track i think is its really well mixed. everything was even and steady throughout the track, and nothing was out of balance.

all in all, job well done.