#1
this is a song a guitarist and i (im a bass player) have been working on for awhile. its finally starting to come along and im pleased so far but id like a little advise and critisism to help me finish it. its fairly simple because we intend to accually play it when its done, provided i can write some lyrics. a simple solo and maybe another verse is all i think it needs. thoughts? many thanks
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to the wolves.zip
this is my song. i made it out of music. please help it grow big and strong by criticising it mercilessly
#2
let me guess u ripped the song name off of trivium and metallica?

to the rats
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of wolf and man
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to the wolves
#3
umm..... no. to the wolves, as in thrown to them. trivium is annoying mall metal and ive never even heard of that metallica song. besides its a working title
this is my song. i made it out of music. please help it grow big and strong by criticising it mercilessly
#4
nothing like metallica or trivium... but it could use a solo and probably another verse before the solo... (use solo as outro) but other than that no suggestions. maybe include a 2nd guitar if you are able to... and of course drums for performance.


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Last edited by GSD N3 at Jun 27, 2008,