#1
i DON't know if it's good. please tell me what i could do better and if i'm heading in the right direction or not. the song is called Idea #1 and it's on my profile.

thanks!
#2
honestly, i give it an 8.5, sounds sweet tho.

sounds like something that would be on Punk-O-Matic...
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#3
sounds trippy,dude.
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#5
the first part is a little sloppy, i mean not structured enough. also it doesn't help that the other guitar is a little off-beat. it would sound great if you fixed that.
#6
Good ideas in there. I like it.

I'd go 8 but would be higher with some practice, I bet.
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#7
5/10 it was allright but definetly need like some form of direction it just feels kinda destination less


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#8
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5/10 it was allright but definetly need like some form of direction it just feels kinda destination less


please crit my song on my profile


I thought your stuff was good man. It sounded like some notes weren't fretted all the way but i liked the overall idea. With a bit more practice it could be a great song.
#9
8/10

Good ideas - it sounds pretty sick.

It is a little sloppy though - keep playing it until you have it as tight as you can get it.

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=12729843#post12729843
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#14
Pretty good, but you really really need to practice with a metronome... it's completely random and sloppy.