I'm well aware that the vocal take sucks, but that was the best I could do that day. Any other problems?

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Hmm... really nothing too wrong with it.
Really not my taste in music though. Well, the bass/guitar (?) in the intro seemed kind of weird, kinda farty, and I think you overdid it with that effect at 0:30. Yeah, vocals seem kind of lifeless, but as you said, you had a bad vocal day. I get those all the time with guitar .
Overall, quite good to altern/indie fans.
I really don't like that style of music, but it was fun to listen to.

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