#1
ok. this is a bit new for me i don't usually write intrumentals. Even though my songs don't have lyrics they do i just can't sing.

but whatever pretty much the norm soloist direct into my computer.

it's called instumental 1 so crit for crit.

yah i know the mix needs work this took me about 20 min to record so the mix isn't amazing
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#2
wow that was really cool. i liked the kinda chugging rhythm. one thing though,

i think you should turn down the rhythm and turn up the lead. lead was to quiet so i couldnt always pick out what you were playing.

now if you get a real drummer in their that would be really sweet.

if youd like to crit this here video id be much obliged.....yall
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=779392
#3
What are you using to record? Direct into your computer's line in or something? Seems like there's a lot of hum on that recording, kinda taking away from all the tones.

I like the music, though!
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#4
I can't hardly hear the lead guitar because the rythem is crushing same. From what i can hear it sounds like a pretty awsome solo. If you rerecord let me know and I'll check it out.
#5
yah I'll redo it today k?
Quote by gregs1020
Brett has been saving for a splawn for 4 years
countries have been toppled in the time it's taking, revolutions won got a black pres

yawn


Quote by bubb_tubbs
When he finally gets one it'll probably be televised like the Berlin Wall coming down.
The end of an era