#1
This is a song we started to write but didnt quite finish tell me what you think.
Please give some suggestions to complete them. Thanks.

SIX FEET UNDER
Tot Baby Lastwagen
How It Feels To Be Forcibly Fed


I wish I was six feet under
What about you
With mommy and daddy too

We live in a place called hell
Our neighbors our demands
And our angels are our slaves

I wish I was six feet under
Where everyone is happy


I don’t want to cry anymore
#2
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Closed.
This is not a pipe