i made this during english class when we were studying greek mythology and poetry. its for my poem project. is it good?

Make some lines
Make them rhyme
Like a man-eating orchid
Let it bite
To be as blunt as cupid
Is not a crime

Black bandana as black as night
White blanket as white as white
The water is blue
So is the sky
Grass is green
So is sprite

Make some lines
Based on life
Peace love and empathy
It’s all blasphemy
Quote by Arthur Curry
this was okay. a little broken up here and there. a lot of lines ripping of nirvana.

lol only the first 2 lines... dont tell my teacher lol
Last edited by urdad at Feb 9, 2008,