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c4c (only if your comments are constructive)

ok this was just like stream of consciousness i was really pissed at my parents so i sat down at the computer and this is what came out

there have been no edits yet, i just want to see where people think i should take this song from here

F*** life
I knew it was never fair
And f*** you
I knew that you never cared
I'm so mad at you
For all the s*** that you put me through
You too, dad
I know you never loved me

Don't act like it was something unavoidable
Like you toiled and worked hard not to fall in and out of love
Trying to hide the facts but I'm not a dumbass
You play with my exhistance just to get a f***

I hate
The very sight of you now
I wait
In silence when you pass me in the hallway
I notice everything
The creek in the floorboards
The way you cry
In your bedroom at night

Remembering how
We took the drive in silence
And in our minds we went
In opposite directions
You tore out
A piece of my soul
So don't act
Don't act

Don't act like it was something unavoidable
Like you toiled and worked hard not to fall in and out of love
Trying to hide the facts but I'm not a dumbass
You play with my exhistance just to get a f***

Just to get a f***

Im caught in the middle
Just barely hanging on
A cry of desperation
Is unheard amongst the pain
Don't worry about me now
Looks like you never did
It shouldn't be legal
What you're doing to me

Well mother and father
Helped me to see
Exactly what I don't want
To grow up to be
I know it sounds crazy
But just maybe they helped
But I really don't know
I really just don't know
#2
less cussing and rythming would make it better. with swears u only want a few that way when ppl hear it they react like OMG instead of wow he cusses a lot
Just because I play the drums doesn't mean I suck at guitar, or ams that I's iz stoopidz.


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