#2
I really enjoyed this song
Great work!

The only thing I didn't like was Bar 101, during the solo.
I just think that one needs to be different to the other two bars before it
Maybe try something like this? ;
Q E E S S E E E
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--------9--------------------|
--6b-------8--5h-6p-5--------|
-----------------------8--6--|
-----------------------------|
-----------------------------|

But great work overall.
It was just slightly repettetive.
Nothing major really.

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#3
Hey, thanks BassPoet, I took your advice and messed with bar 101 until I found something that went a little better. I was shaky on that bar anyways. Thanks.
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