#1
Glass of Pain

Verse 1: the leaves are on the ground
i'm listening but there's no sound
of those angels calling my name
telling me that i'm insane

Verse 2: the glass is in the air
it's almost touching my hair
the time is frozen solid
i'm thinking about what i did

Pre Chorus: there's that glass of pain
stealing my name
the crows are parading in
the death match will begin

Chorus: the crows will eat the meat
and i shall be beat
by the sunrise and sunset
and they haven't even met
the feather's tell me about you
and i don't know what to do
i lit some candles in honor of your face
so i hope you're in a good place

Verse 3: i can sense the danger
of that sad anger
on the house upon the hill
where the scarecrow likes to chill

Verse 4: eyeballs in the jar
remind me of that car
that ended your life
and the only thing left were your kids and wife

Bridge: she doesn't even know
that you're life was about to go
your kid just learned how to catch and throw
it brought a tear to my eye oh oh
your daughter has her hair in the bow oh oh

Pre Chorus
Chorus x2

Ending: she doesn't even know you but i did
Obama '08
#3
it's ok ish..nothing too amazing

seems like some stuff is there just for the sake of rhyming and seems kind of corny to me

but just fine tune it a little bit and i'm sure it'll be good