#1
c4c if your comments are constructive

by the way, when i read this aloud, i realized that some people may think that the flow is really off, but it works the way im thinking it

Cold shoulders
Is all I'll ever know
This blows over
I'm only a part of your freak show
You've got free seats in the first row

They say
That all good things must end
Is this true with the bad?
I hope it is 'cuz I'm dying
And you're not even trying
To save me

Oh don't pretend like you care. You see me
Lying on the ground dying now trying to survive and you just stand there
I'm sorry I just need someone to blame
And since I see you every time I close my eyes
You're the first person that came into my mind
I'm sorry

Blank stares
Coming after me
It's not fair
I try to be all that I can be
Why is it that you can't stand me?

All that
I can expect from you
And all the things that you give
Tend to fall into to groups
So I am through with you

Oh don't pretend like you care. You see me
Lying on the ground dying now trying to survive and you just stand there
I'm sorry I just need someone to blame
And since I see you every time I close my eyes
You're the first person that came into my mind
I'm sorry

I'm sorry
I'm sorry
I'm sorry
I'm so sorry

Woah

Oh don't pretend like you care. You see me
Lying on the ground dying now trying to survive and you just stand there
I'm sorry I just need someone to blame
And since I see you every time I close my eyes
You're the first person that came into my mind
I'm sorry
#2
Well, if I'll crit this better tomorrow.
But, you have used alot of cliches in here.
Could do without D=.
#3
I'm too tired to crit right now, but I will give you an idea; you can choose to add or ignore it.

When I read the lyrics, this came to my mind:

"A cold shoulder to cry upon
Freezing my tears"

I will not use that in my work, seeing as I'd call the song Cold Shoulder, and you took that title already. As I said, the line is yours for the taking.