#1
its a slow love song for a girl i like and we are good mates, and she is the singer in my band so im gonna play her it at band practice and sing it for her, and im gonna get the rest of the band to help play it, its bout all the time i think about her, and how close i feel to her, and how much i want to be with her.

anyway need some names for it, anything is good and doesnt need to be part of the lyrics, ideas? cheers
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#2
imho, telling by the circumstances, it should come from you.
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#3
yeah but i cant think of a name
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#6
Sapient, you can be nice to the thread starter and indicate him/her why his/her thread has been reported, you know .

Sanitarium91, next time I see you post in a reported thread, you get a warning.

Jimbelton, we have many problems here. First off, if you looked around, you'd realize that this section of the forum is for pieces to be up for criticism. All advice/help when it comes to writing/songwriting/lyrics without having a piece up for critique goes in the "techniques" subforum.

However, when it comes to your thread, it would help a lot to have the actual song to help you come up with a name. However, make sure that the title of your thread is the title of your piece and only that.

Please take a look at the S+L FAQ (an announcement atop this board) to ensure that your threads won't be closed again. Thanks .