#1
Here's A Song I've Been Workin On,

Can't Quite Get The Thing As A Whole To Sound Right :

The Lands Below Have Started Moving
You Were Hiding, Now Your Found
The Lands Below Have Started Moving
Not Even God Can Save You Now

The Hounds Of Hell Know Who They're Tracking
You'll Never Be Far From Their Sound
The Hounds Of Hell Know Who They're Tracking
Not Even God Can Save You Now

You Dont Want To Meet This Twisted Fury
Not Even God Can Save You Now
You Dont Want To Meet This Twisted Fury
Only I Can Save You Now

Any Comments, Crit Or Just General Wonderings More Than Welcome.

Cheers
#2
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