#1

Verse 1
Why do I hurt
Why do I scream
Maybe it’s the blood
The steady stream

The pain I feel
The pain inside
The pain that had made me
Tremble and hide

Chorus #1
Pain
Pouring out
Pouring out
Bleeding out
Of me

Verse 2
Why do I hurt
Why do I scream
When will I wake
From this dream

How much more
Will I endure
Before this pain
Will no longer pour

Chorus #1 (X2)

Bridge
Will I ever wake
Will I ever wake
I don’t know how much more
I can take

Chorus #2
Pain
Coming out
Shoving out
Pouring out
Of me
#2
Nice song. Simple, but nice. A little emo. Actually, a lot emo, but i like it. With the right riffs and a good solo this could be a really good song. Normally i don't like repetition, but this time i do. Whoot to the song. Kudos.
#3
this is piss poor mate, it sounds like it was written by a ten year old... i dunno if you have ever read Korn's lyrics but if the singer was ten years old and was raped by a retarded chimp this is the kind of filth he would crap out. grevhead221- your a douche for applauding this trash
#4
sorry to say this but i agree it was very repetitive and didnt have any meaning to it but if it did to you u have to show us through your words not put a couple together and hope it is a song sorry but this needs to be re-thought about and it is very cliche by the way sorry mate nice try though