#1
I sit in the dark
Alone once again
I sit in the dark
Let it begin
I sit in the dark
Forever the thoughts
I sit in the dark
Forever it starts..

Alone here again
Where are my friends?
Alone here again
They all just pretend
Alone here again
But I don't care
Alone here again
I wish they were here!

I sit in the dark
Alone once again
I sit in the dark
Let it begin
I sit in the dark
Forever the thoughts
I sit in the dark
Forever it starts..

-SOLO-

I sit in the dark
Alone once again
I sit in the dark
Let it end...
Let it end..(echo)
#4
Wayyy too repetitive. Every single stanza starts with "I sit in the dark alone once again." Other than that little problem i really like the song. Its easy to relate to. Just fix the repetition a little and its a good song.

Crit mine? Its called Oblivion.
#5
I don't like the repetitiveness, but it is pretty good.
I'm the same as I was when I was six years old
And oh my god I feel so damn old
I don't really feel anything