#1
hey guys. heres a new song. its a little shaky and needs work, sure, but its a song from the heart, and i'd like to play it to my friend on thursday lol (wink wink). so any help would be welcome. crit 4 crit, obviously.
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up and down

i will always love you, baby
take a look in my eyes
and hopefully you'll realise
i still think about you
almost every day

and i just need to say
that these days i'm up and down
i try to keep my feet on the ground
i know that i'll be leaving this town
some day

and then i'll turn and say
i've got to go now
the world is waiting for me
i need to find out
if theres someone i can be
but sit for now, girl
at least until we meet again

katie, you've been my best friend
oh yeah
katie you've been my best friend

and now these days im up and down
i try to keep my feet on the ground
i know that i'll be leaving this town
some day

and then i'll turn and say
i've got to go now
the world is waiting for me
i need to find out
if theres someone i can be
but sit for now, girl
at least until we meet again

katie, you've been my best friend
for a while
and until i return
i'll only see your sweet, sweet smile
in my sleep

oh
i've got to go now
the world is waiting for me
i need to find out
if theres someone i can be
but sit for now, girl
at least until we meet again

katie, you've been my best friend
katie, you've been my best friend
and until we meet again
katie, you'll be my best friend
#2
its a good song, but it seems like ur saying goodbye to her. if you are then great. if you're not then dont sing this one lol. you dont know how hard that was for me to read cause my ex is katie. its a really good song though. from the heart just like you said. i liked it. just make sure that if you arent saying goodbye or are breaking up with her, dont sing it. but its a really good song. ok there's ur crit lol. mine's called oblivion. thx. great song. keep up the good work.