#1
this town is full of chemicals
the air gets heavier and heavier
this town is full of chemicals
but we still dance and we still sweat

were only doing as we're told
a generation bought and sold
she's only doing as she's told
she's only
she's lonely
what do you do when you think you have it?
do i just turn invisible?
i don't mean to be rude but
you are in my peripherals

this town is full of chemicals
the air gets heavier and heavier
grey buildings all symmetrical
but we still dance and we still sweat

were only doing as we're told
a generation bought and sold
she's only doing as she's told
she's only
she's lonely
what do you do when you think you have it?
do i just turn invisible?
i don't mean to be rude but
you are in my peripherals

this town is full of chemicals
a golden atmosphere
this town is full of chemicals
a golden city of fear

too late
you're too late
i told all your friends
that you're too late
you're too late again

what do you do when you think you have it?
do i just turn invisible?
i don't mean to be rude but
you are in my peripherals

this town is full of chemicals
a golden atmosphere
this town is full of chemicals
a golden city of fear
#2
I didnt get the message at all it ryhmes (sp?) and all but there isnt a message that I can see and I cant relate to it It does read well though
#3
this town is full of chemicals
the air gets heavier and heavier
this town is full of chemicals
but we still dance and we still sweat
a good start, I'm intrigued.
were only doing as we're told
a generation bought and sold
she's only doing as she's told
she's only
she's lonely
what do you do when you think you have it?
do i just turn invisible?
i don't mean to be rude but
you are in my peripherals
A little cryptic, I'm thinking it's something to do with pollution, kids not caring about what's going on and just wanting to party
this town is full of chemicals
the air gets heavier and heavier
grey buildings all symmetrical
but we still dance and we still sweat
okay, still pretty good
were only doing as we're told
a generation bought and sold
she's only doing as she's told
she's only
she's lonely
what do you do when you think you have it?
do i just turn invisible?
i don't mean to be rude but
you are in my peripherals

this town is full of chemicals
a golden atmosphere
this town is full of chemicals
a golden city of fear
It's getting repetitive and it's not progressing anymore
too late
you're too late
i told all your friends
that you're too late
you're too late again

what do you do when you think you have it?
do i just turn invisible?
i don't mean to be rude but
you are in my peripherals

this town is full of chemicals
a golden atmosphere
this town is full of chemicals
a golden city of fear

The first couple of stanzas were good, and I love the flow and phrasing throughout, it's awesome and very original, but it's too repetitive. Nothing is happening, it's just the same verse and chorus over and over again, except for a brief break, but that break doesn't provide anything new. I really like the images this song provides, expand on that, and/or try to crystallize a meaning, cause it's a little cryptic right now.
#4
I feel like you were trying to express the way people lately don´t seem to notice the changes life can have, but they prefer to keep living in their own routine. I really liked it, specially the way you reapeted several parts. Congrats on making everything ryhme and flow I find it really hard.