Ok so i've spruced up a song of mine a little bit, please tell me what you think, also please check out my other songs while you're at it. (look under my MP3s on my profile)
hey dude. I think your good at playing guitar but you need to smooth out your transitions like from intro to main riff and main riff to solo. the solo itself is good but theres no anticipation for it, it would be better if you knew the climax was coming. also, i think novicane is a funny name because its such an intense song. novicane is sort of a numb slow thing. idk just my thoughts. its good though. i dig the main riff a lot. maybe check out my new song. its weird as hell.