#1
this is a continuation of just friends so you should probably read that first . it's basically part two of that song with a different name. constructive criticism appreciated. Note i changed the chorus from

Chorus
we're just friends
but being friends is fine
and we're still friends
if she never changes her mind
we're just friends
even though I’ll always love her
we'll still be friends
and be there for each other

to

chorus
friends through it all
problems big and small
through thin and thick
like gorilla glue we stick
we haven't changed
our friendship's the same
more might be better
but we're cool together


Still Friends

when he asked her out i felt really bad
seeing them together made me feel so sad
I was so pissed that I didn't ask her
shoulda taken the chance maybe now I’ll learn
not that being friends is a bad thing to be
its just I want her, want her to want me

chorus
friends through it all
problems big and small
through thin and thick
like gorilla glue we stick
we haven't changed
our friendship's the same
more might be better
but we're cool together

it was late September freshman year
when i heard what I’d been longin’ to hear
i saw it one day on her myspace page
it said she was single right under her age
i knew I had to ask her or I’d hate myself
and that isn’t good for anyone’s health

chorus
friends through it all
problems big and small
through thin and thick
like gorilla glue we stick
we haven't changed
our friendship's the same
more might be better
but we're cool together

i knew that I couldn’t mess up twice
or else I’d never look her in the eyes
so i asked right when the school day ends
but she said she just wants to be friends
i was depressed and sad at first
till i realized it could be worse
she didn’t say yes, but it’s not the end
because she’ll always be my good friend

chorus
friends through it all
problems big and small
through thin and thick
like gorilla glue we stick
we haven't changed
our friendship's the same
more might be better
but we're cool together
#4
the funny part is, it does sound a little fruity. Just the overall message about how you're gonna be dealing with your feelings while trying to be her friend. Doesn't usually end well. But about the piece, I do kinda like the whole rhyming thing you've got going. The "Want you to want me" sounds a bit to much like Cheap trick to me. But whatever
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