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Lost in a state of mind.
I want to leave this place behind.
The place that resembles your face.
The face that I want to hate

But everytime I think of you.
The feelings come rushing back likes it nothing new.
So I guess I'll just keep on walkin' by.
Hope to God that these feelings die.

(guitar break)

Dematieralisze my love, and gain the hate.
I want to break free and crush my chains.
The keep me from bein free.
I want to get away from the trap you layed down for me.

But everytime I get away.
You plead for me not to go, and beg for me to stay.
When you start to cry I cant say no.
I'll go lay in my cage, and hold my head low.

(guitar break)

(guitar solo)

Lost in a state of mind.
I want to leave this place behind.
The place that resembles your face.
The face that I want to hate

(guitar solo 2)

C4C!!!
#2
I like this, the rhyming is done well and it really flows. It conveys the message well. I even started to make a melody for it in my head, lol. The only part I don't like is in the 4th stanza 2nd line after the comma. Unless you have to melody perfect, I'd scrap that.
I'm the same as I was when I was six years old
And oh my god I feel so damn old
I don't really feel anything