#1
I have been messing with the main riff for a few days, and finally came up with this. It's not perfect and it's still in a rough form. Near the end I started rushing so the second verse kinda gets messy. I'm open to whatever anyone has to say, I would like to really redo it and make it playable live, even though I've redone this song 3 times already.

It's in my profile.