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Hey all....I've been working on one of my newer tunes and had some lyrics that I jotted down. Just signed up on UG and seemed like a good place to get some good feedback so **** it....I'll see what everyone thinks.

"New Earth"
Welcome to a world destined to fade away
Nothing but a spec in a glimpse of time
Broken and denied, shattered as we fall
Picking up the pieces of mistakes
That have taken their toll

Piercing eyes grip our hearts
Foundations beneath our feet collapse
Shaking hands of fury high
As the harsh blue sky grins back
Bodies lie, forgotten and deprived
Dreaming of that brighter day
We see the paths before us split
We're the ones that need to be saved


Pre-Chorus
Now we're searching for something more
Something to light the way
And give this world another(Day)...

Chorus
Days fade
And still we don't awake from this nightmare
Trapped inside this mystery
Betray our fate
And pull ourselves through this darkness
One more time, we'll make this dream ours


In your absense we will grow
Recover the hope that we once had
Fight to keep our place
Our place among the stars
Take another step into this eternity
Blank pages of our past
Blaze with the fires
Of the majestic unknown


Pre-Chorus
Now we're searching for something more
Something to light the way
And give this world another (Day)...

Chorus
Days fade
And still we don't awake from this nightmare
Trapped inside this mystery
Betray our fate
And pull ourselves through this darkness
One more time, we'll make this dream ours