that was awesome dude, I liked the change at the middle where it goes from sad to kind of happy, I think there's nothing wrong with it, except the length, but you said is incomplete so I'll wait. Good job!

mind critting mine?(new one in sig) thanks.
great intro
really liking the nice double hand usage [better than mine haha]
.50ish, really cool
then the changle, well implemented

i think so far 8.5/10
pretty sweet but you need to finish it
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