#1
hey guys im completely new to posting on here and wondered if someone could pass judgement upon an intro i laid down today on cubase?
i only got cubase today and havent worked out half of it yet!

like i said its only a basic intro but im proud of it, its the first time ive ever heard myself playing!

please let me know what you think and where i am going wrong

many thanks!
#2
No, you should be on the left track, not the right track, my friend.


EDIT: Honestly, I don't hear any originality in it at all. I suggest doing it over.
Last edited by Teufel at Feb 13, 2008,
#3
It was pretty good. Sounded pop punkish if that was what you are trying to get at.
#10
hate to be a prick, but that sounds a lot like the intro to love at first fright by the murderdolls, same chords, almost same rhythm....all until the other stuff comes in
#11
ur not bein a prick m8, ive never listened to them so i dont think thats possible but i will check them out now!

thanks!
#12
Quote by satchmad
i did but didnt get ant crit



Crit other people's work, then link to your thread so they can crit it back.
It's called crit4crit, or c4c.
#15
i just listened to that song, its not exact, but it just instantly reminded me of that song
#16
Sounds very similar to many many many popular song, all based off of Pachelbel's Canon in D. Still, it's nicely done, and it sounds really good.
#17
thanks guys i didnt expect this much feedback its all good stuff, i will see what i can cook up today and try and post something worth listening to this time!!

thanks again

Donk