ill crit as I listen:

I'm all about the xylophone/chimes and the low ooh's backing in the chorus. I also feel like the strings were appropriate for this song. I did kind of want to vocals to break into a higher range around the climax. Wasn't disappointed though, very good stuff.

return the favor? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=12770216#post12770216
There's a 95% chance what was written above here was very stupid