#3
the blues thing is your average 12 bar blues with a minor pentatonic lead....

the sweet intro sounds like any blink182 song ever made..


pretty average stuff...
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#5
Im only trying to get to grips with cubase at the mo.

Its only my 2nd attempt at recording ANYTHING plus its 9:15 and i havent slept so cut me a little slack please?
#6
Well In that case...

OMG U ARE TEH BEST GUITARIST EVER!!@!@!

I was only telling the truth, and you were the one who came into the pit, begging to be "crit'd"
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#8
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your right sorry m8

This is annoying.

I'm trying to crit here.
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#9
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Im only trying to get to grips with cubase at the mo.

Its only my 2nd attempt at recording ANYTHING plus its 9:15 and i havent slept so cut me a little slack please?



No.
#10
hahahahahah that means a lot comin from someone whos bass skills sound like a goose farting in the fog.
#11
crit my stuff

Quote by satchmad
hahahahahah that means a lot comin from someone whos bass skills sound like a goose farting in the fog.


oh ****, dude run to emo/pop punk section as fast as you can, get away from here
And we will weave in and out of sanity unnoticed
Swirling in blissfully restless visions of all our bleary progress
Glowing in radiant madness
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#12
Quote by satchmad
Im only trying to get to grips with cubase at the mo.

Its only my 2nd attempt at recording ANYTHING plus its 9:15 and i havent slept so cut me a little slack please?


That's not our problem.

If I'd wandered into an audition for a band, and played like crap, they wouldn't accept me. Not even if I said "sorry guys, I haven't slept."

(Let's just ignore the fact that I play like crap even when I'm fully awake)
#13
*adjusts glasses*

To be frank, the "bluesy riff" was a basic guitar class creation at best.

The "sweet intro" was your extremely generic punk progression with nothing new or exciting.

But hey, if that's the best you can do, it's not all that bad. Practice up.
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#14
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oh ****, dude run to emo/pop punk section as fast as you can, get away from here

Well...He's sorta telling the truth...
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#16
haha that "Sweet intro" that you claimed to be an original piece of work is a a cover of about 20 different song's.
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#17
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I know, but I predicted AD coming back and laying a smack down
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#18
fair comments i spose

i know it wont help my playin but does anyone know how to make the recording sound any better?

im using cubase and the quality is much better when i play it on there but when i export it as an mp3 it sounds rough.

any suggestions?
#20
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hahahahahah that means a lot comin from someone whos bass skills sound like a goose farting in the fog.

You asked to be critted.
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#21
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hahahahahah that means a lot comin from someone whos bass skills sound like a goose farting in the fog.


No it doesn't.

His newest bass riff sounds like the theme song to his avatar.

duh nuh nuh duh nuh nuh CHARLES MANSON duh nuh nuh duh nuh nuh
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#24
Wrong forum

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