It sounds really nice to me, but around 0:30 the tempo goes way up. And you don't play the rest of the song with the same relaxed feel, witch is sad cus the both tempo and the feel of the start is great. Maybe you should try to practice a little with a metronome.
With that said, i got to admit that i find you playing really good!

Please visit my thread, and give me some constructive feed back http://ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=783690
Very good, you should play the whole song, and try using a bt.

Check my cover of STH out (it's in my profile).