#1
this is my first post, never knew there were forums,

anyway, im in a band and i really wanna write some songs, im great and making rhymes but i cant seem to express anything without it being cheesy or cliche,
my inspirations are taking back sunday, funeral for a friend and the red hot chili peppers,
can any of you give me some tips please? thnx
#2
if it sounds too cheesy, try not letting it make sense. Or make it a bit more cryptic then it should sound less cliche
#4
Quote by Irontallica09
if it sounds too cheesy, try not letting it make sense. Or make it a bit more cryptic then it should sound less cliche



thnx for the advice,