#1
A dumb one I wrote some time ago. It's called 'Your Poor Floor'

Me and the ashtray are a million miles apart
And I've let this cigarette burn down way too far
And I'm too drunk to get up
Way too drunk to get up
So I'm just gone sit here
I'm gonna wait till I can wait no more
I hate to do it, but I'm probably gonna flick it on your floor

Me and the bathroom are a million miles apart
And I'm at the bottom of this whiskey jar
And I'm to drunk to get up
Way too drunk to get up
So I'm just gone sit here
I'm gonna wait till I can wait no more
I hate to do it, but I'm probably gonna throw up on your floor

Me and my home are a million miles apart
And I've let this buzz go on way too far
And I'm too drunk to get up
Way too drunk to get up
So I'm just gone sit here
I'm gonna wait till I can wait no more
I hate to do it, but I'm probably gonna pass out on your floor
#2
lol that is gold man that rulz lol
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#4
ha awesome... i totally thought that the 2nd stanza was gona be about taking a piss on the floor for some reason
And as we wind on down the road
Our shadows taller than our soul.
#5
I think people are missing the real sadness of this piece. Sure, the speaker's telling us to feel bad for the floor, but inevitably we end up feeling bad for the speaker. Is there no one to help them?

And to think, they're going to lay down where they just threw their cigarette and then threw up. That's a rough night. What I get out of this is a lonely compassion, if only for the floor. The speaker feels bad but there's not much they can do about it at this point.
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for those of you who said you'd be interested in hearing my lyrics put to music- I started work on recording an album, if you get in touch with me pm or otherwise I'd be more than happy to fill you in