I recorded my self playing part of welcome to paradise. Its on my profile.
tell me what you think, can i improve on anything?
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ur missing like one strum on a lot of the parts....small but noticeable. and i think theres too much distortion. u need that guitar feel....
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u need to get the rythym in there. you dont have any of the mutes, the chords in the chorus are a little off, and the distortion sounds weird with the song. other than that it was pretty good, keep practicing
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It was pretty sloppy.

Oh and it could use more flanger...

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Flanger much? Turn that off dude, keep it nice and effectless... besides distortion of course.
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