not my style but sound good, I liked the keyboards, The lead guitar was good too. It got kind of boring from the bridge to the outro, but vocals can cover it. It looks like you putted a lot of effort in it, Great job!

C4C? (new one in sig) thanks.
Pretty neat song...

In measure 16, I don't think the octaves fit that well.
The keyboard part that came in at 23 sounds like a song I've heard.. But I don't know which.
The keyboard part at 93 also sounds like a song.
The transition to 105 isn't that good really.. It needs some work.. Right now it just sounds too random and not good.

Other than that, great job.

Listen to one of mine? The new ones are at the bottom of my sig. =)
That was really cool, a lot better than I expected!

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those were unnecessary

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