#2
first riff isnt bad, reminds parkway drive a bit. second sucks though
#4
maybe i dont like it because i play metalcore and you have written "I HATE METALCORE"
#7
the first one could be sweet with some harmonized something or anothers.


second one....

....riiiight....
#9
Secound one suked balls. It was horrible but the first one was good. Too bad the secound one suked. I mean was really really bad. Not like the first one but ya know what i mean...
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