first riff isnt bad, reminds parkway drive a bit. second sucks though
maybe i dont like it because i play metalcore and you have written "I HATE METALCORE"
the first one could be sweet with some harmonized something or anothers.

second one....

Secound one suked balls. It was horrible but the first one was good. Too bad the secound one suked. I mean was really really bad. Not like the first one but ya know what i mean...
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