#2
i like it. i cant remember the name of this band it reminds me off.
my mate showed me them and this sounds alot like them from what i remember.
dont worry, i liked them!

just an idea for you but after when it ends, what about a typical metalcore type chugga riff?

i was thinking something like...


d-
A-
F-
C-
G------5---5-----4---4-----7-8-7-8
C-0-0---0---0-0---0---0-0-


i hope that lines up right, its all 16ths and it would make a cool sounding key change! all the low C notes would be palm muted!
I deeply regret the 6661 in my username. Siiiigh. Damn you, 14 year old me, you edgy little bastard.
#3
Thanks for your idea Carl6661 ..I'll try for it..and also thanks for listening my stuff
#4
thats alright, im always uup for helping out fellow musicians!

make sure you post the finished song up here so we can hear it!
id love you hear more post-hardcore on UG!
I deeply regret the 6661 in my username. Siiiigh. Damn you, 14 year old me, you edgy little bastard.