#1
freewrite, or on the spot as people seem to call it.


in a vacuum i'm released
swallowed by
granted the right to decease

unknown eye that watches me
a shape is what i tend to be
its hard to tell
no one knows whats meant for me
sense of you but nothing else
chasing down what was yourself
i wouldn't care for it perfectly
an off-white shell is less discreet

what never could the world see is now
it came from when not how
what never could the world see is now
it came from when not how
Last edited by crossroads07 at Mar 14, 2008,
#2
whenever i make up a song/ lyrics on the spot, its always very strange, random and short. xD. Then i'll forget it before i get the chance to write anything down, any tips on songwriting?
JacK!