#1
i sit alone and stare at the walls but **** alls happening
play on my guitar from time to time
trying to sleep just dont kill the time
the televisions a waste of my life
a hollow shell with floors and walls is ****ing boring

search the web and search my mind
dreaming away my paradise
im so damn bored that i dont know
whats happening too me
all i want is to find a distraction to make me happy
need to find a way to kill my teenage apathy

walk around the town but theres **** all to see
try to have some fun and they want my money
i thought the best things from life were free
im sick of day light robbery
in a town which is my outside world im going ****ing crazy

search the web and search my mind
dreaming away my paradise
im so damn bored that i dont know
whats happening too me
all i want is to find a distraction to make me happy
need to find a way to kill my teenage apathy
Light touch my hand, in a dream of Golden Skans, from now on.
You can forget our future plans.
Last edited by Gizmo69 at Feb 14, 2008,
#2
pretty good. the chorus sounds a bit like green day's "longview":

bite my lip and close my eyes
take me away to paradise
im so damn bored im going blind!!!
and i smell like ****

also the opening line to the same song is:
sit around and watch the tube, but nothing's on

Somewhat similar (at least to me)

I dont know how you would play your song (music speed, chords etc.) but based on lyrics alone there are a few similarities. Pretty good song otherwise, more musicians need to be playing their own songs, covers can only be done for so long.
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#3
I also got a huge Green Day vibe from these lyrics. Not bad at all, but could use a little work here and there.
#4
Quote by Winter Sky
I also got a huge Green Day vibe from these lyrics. Not bad at all, but could use a little work here and there.

oh ****.. i hope that not the vibe.. thats not what i was going for...lol.. i wounder if green day now own all song about boredom...lol... bollocks..lol

ah we.. at least you like it some what...
Light touch my hand, in a dream of Golden Skans, from now on.
You can forget our future plans.