#1
I study french in Ontario. Any mistakes in my story/assignment?


1-Un journee un petit punaise est parti un evier et est alle vers le parc.

2-Est etait loin aller a le parc, et le punaise est fatigue.

3-Il va s’endormir pour six heures!

4-Est etait temps alle a le fin de le six heures.

5-Le punaise est triste parce que il ne fait pas jouer a le parc.

6-Il est triste, mais il est recontre un autre punaise!

7-Le autre punais a eu une montre.

8-“Bonjour, triste punaise”, il a dit. “Comment vous appelez-vous?”

9-“George”, le triste punaise dit. “Je suis triste parce qui c’est trop tard. Je suis ne jouer pas.”

10-Le punaise a eu un montre. C’est seul trois heures! Le deus punaises sont alles le parc.


Please, only people who really know french. Thanks
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#4
I fucking despise the French language. I didn't have to take the course in school when I lived in Calgary, but I just moved to Nova Scotia and it's a mandatory class here, so I'm like 9 years behind everybody else. I actually feel like I'm retarded when I go to French class.

On topic now, maybe put those sentences in an on-line translator like this and see if they translate to English properly?
#6
1-Une journée une petitte punaise est parti un evier et est allé vers le parc.

2-Elle était loin allé a le parc, et la punaise est fatigue.

3-elle va s’endormir pour six heures!

4-elle était temps alle a le fin de le six heures. (i don't even understand this one to be honest lol)

5-La punaise est triste parce-qu' elle ne fait pas jouer a le parc.

6-elle est triste, mais elle recontre une autre punaise!

e7-L'autre punaise a eu une montre.

8-“Bonjour, triste punaise”, elle a dit. “Comment appelez-vous?”

9-“George”, le triste punaise dit. “Je suis triste parce qui c’est trop tard. Je ne joue pas.”

10-Le punaise a eu une montre. C’est seul trois heures! Le deus punaises sont alles le parc.


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#7
Im in immersion... im 14 though

If i knew what puneuse was tho id help


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I study french in Ontario. Any mistakes in my story/assignment?


1-Un journee un petit punaise est parti un evier et est alle vers le parc.

2-Est etait loin aller a le parc, et le punaise est fatigue.

3-Il va s’endormir pour six heures!

4-Est etait temps alle a le fin de le six heures.

5-Le punaise est triste parce que il ne fait pas jouer a le parc.

6-Il est triste, mais il est recontre un autre punaise!

7-Le autre punais a eu une montre.

8-“Bonjour, triste punaise”, il a dit. “Comment vous appelez-vous?”

9-“George”, le triste punaise dit. “Je suis triste parce qui c’est trop tard. Je suis ne jouer pas.”

10-Le punaise a eu un montre. C’est seul trois heures! Le deus punaises sont alles le parc.


Please, only people who really know french. Thanks


Okay.

Gimme the english part of the text, so I can translate it properly. I don't understand the text with your translations :p (P.s. I'm from Quebec, so french is my main)
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wow...any real help? I don't think I wanna use translators, thanks though


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1-Un jour une petit punaise est partie d'un évier et est allée vers un parc.

2-Elle était allée loin dans le parc,et était fatiguée.

3-Elle s'endorma pendant six heures!

4-Il était temps de partir, une fois les six heures écoulées.

5-La punaise était triste car elle n'avait pas pu jouer dans le parc.

6-Triste, mais elle rencontra une autre punaise!

7-L'autre punaise avait une montre.

8-“Bonjour, triste punaise”, dit-elle. “Comment vous appelez-vous?”

9-“George”, dit la triste punaise. “Je suis triste parce qu'il est trop tard. Je ne peux plus jouer =( "

10-L'autre punaise regarda sa montre. Il n'était que trois heures! Les deux punaises allèrent alors jouer dans le parc.

Any mistakes in my story/assignment?



I doubt this will be of ANY use to you but still...
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1-Un jour une petit punaise est partie d'un évier et est allée vers un parc.

2-Elle était allée loin dans le parc,et était fatiguée.

3-Elle s'endorma pendant six heures!

4-Il était temps de partir, une fois les six heures écoulées.

5-La punaise était triste car elle n'avait pas pu jouer dans le parc.

6-Triste, mais elle rencontra une autre punaise!

7-L'autre punaise avait une montre.

8-“Bonjour, triste punaise”, dit-elle. “Comment vous appelez-vous?”

9-“George”, dit la triste punaise. “Je suis triste parce qu'il est trop tard. Je ne peux plus jouer =( "

10-L'autre punaise regarda sa montre. Il n'était que trois heures! Les deux punaises allèrent alors jouer dans le parc.




I doubt this will be of ANY use to you but still...


I didn't want to change his verb tenses but since you did ... :p
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Okay.

Gimme the english part of the text, so I can translate it properly. I don't understand the text with your translations :p (P.s. I'm from Quebec, so french is my main)

lol it seems like we always meet on these niche french translation threads >_<



I didn't want to change his verb tenses but since you did ... :p

Lol yeah I'm too tired to do otherwise (je sais pas pourquoi on se parle en anglais ceci dit =p)
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Okay.

Gimme the english part of the text, so I can translate it properly. I don't understand the text with your translations :p (P.s. I'm from Quebec, so french is my main)


No thanks, I only wrote about half in english, than I did the rest in French without translating it. Thanks anyway
#15
Merci everyone. Oh, by the way, did anyone ontice that the main charecter is named Geaorge? You were all putting it in a feminine tense.
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lol it seems like we always meet on these niche french translation threads >_<


Lol yeah I'm too tired to do otherwise (je sais pas pourquoi on se parle en anglais ceci dit =p)


Utilisons la langue de Molière alors! :p

Je crois qu'il y a peu de personnes d'origine francophone ici, donc notre rencontre est inévitable. Douce fatalité.
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Merci everyone. Oh, by the way, did anyone ontice that the main charecter is named Geaorge? You were all putting it in a feminine tense.


Yup, but the word "Punaise" is feminine.

You have to say : "Une punaise" even if it's a male.
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I study french in Ontario. Any mistakes in my story/assignment?


1-UnE journee unE petitE punaise est partiE un evier (ok what?) et est alle vers le parc.

2-C'etait loin aller AU parc, et lA punaise est fatigue.

3-ELLE va s’endormir pour six heures! (if this is she fell asleep for six hours then it should be this : Elle s'est endormie pour six heures!)

4-C'etait temps DE PARTIR a le fin DES six heures. (i corrected this with the meaning of if was time to leave at the end of the six hours)

5-LA punaise est triste parce QU'ELLE ne PEUX pas jouer AU parc.

6-ELLE est triste, mais ELLE recontre un autre punaise! (if this is past tense it should be : a rencontré

7-L'autre punaisE a eu une montre.

8-“Bonjour, triste punaise”, dit il . “Comment vous appelez-vous?”

9-“George”, lA triste punaise dit. “Je suis triste parce quE c’est trop tard. Je NE PEUT PAS JOUER .” (i corrected that by the meaning of i can't play)

10-LA punaise a eu unE montre. C’est seulment trois heures! LeS deuX punaises sont alleEs AU parc.


Please, only people who really know french. Thanks


French is my first language btw. I corrected all the le/la il/elle stuff assuming that punaise is feminine, im actually not sure which it is, but it sounds right my way, though if your sure its masculine ignore those corrections (and let me know so i can fix it)

Also, im not sure what your thing with the montre is, i know its a watch but are you trying to say that they looked at their watch? cuz as it is your saying they got (as in received) a watch.
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Utilisons la langue de Molière alors! :p

Je crois qu'il y a peu de personnes d'origine francophone ici, donc notre rencontre est inévitable. Douce fatalité.


Vous pouvez m'ajouter a la liste de francophone d'origines. Je suis franco-ontarien (canada) et ma première langue est l français.
#20
ha mais moi c'est pas ma langue d'origine =p mais oui, si quelqu'un créait un groupe jm'y joinderais volontiers
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Yup, but the word "Punaise" is feminine.

You have to say : "Une punaise" even if it's a male.


Are you sure?
#23
For serious, I tried to correct, but I had no damn clue what you want it to mean, so I can't really help you. (I'd even put the accents in if I could!)

EDIT: Une journée, une petite punaise est partie un evier(yeah, wtf?) et est allée vers le parc.

La punaise est allée vers le parc!
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For serious, I tried to correct, but I had no damn clue what you want it to mean, so I can't really help you. (I'd even put the accents in if I could!)


you can put the accents in. combinations of holding down the alt key, and then a four digit code on the number pad for example alt+0233 = é and alt+0224 = à
google it and you can probly find a list of them.
#27
So punaise is feminin, and it's the name of a flat bug that smells bad, or something to do with a nail. TS, what the hell is your homework supposed to be about?

EDIT: ^ If I could help him, I would have put the accents in, sorry about the misunderstanding.
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Are you sure?


Yes I'm sure. You have to say like: George la punaise.
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So punaise is feminin, and it's the name of a flat bug that smells bad, or something to do with a nail. TS, what the hell is your homework supposed to be about?

EDIT: ^ If I could help him, I would have put the accents in, sorry about the misunderstanding.


no worries, i was just letting you know, sorry if you got the wrong impression of it, it's just rather difficult to put tone into short blurbs of text. but that was just meant as a helpful comment for you
#31
Well for your good intentions, I'll give you a tip for faster accent-typing. ALT 130 gives you é and a bunch of numbers around there give you other accents. Now you won't have to punch in that pesky 0.
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Well for your good intentions, I'll give you a tip for faster accent-typing. ALT 130 gives you é and a bunch of numbers around there give you other accents. Now you won't have to punch in that pesky 0.


thanks, i know theres shorter combos, im just dont knwo them and dont really care enough to bother. besides, i finished my last french class last semester (in french schools its required grade 9 to 12) so ill probly rarely write in french anymore anyway

EDIT : hey TS, hows the correction going? you got what you needed?