#1
Soft wet asphalt,accompanied by foot step's echoes
A black path into the wilderness,a thick hairy mess
of grey corpses,Twisted and broken,they lay alone,listening
to the wind whisper as it weaves a blanket of cold upon us.
In the wooden Graveyard of the long departed.

Slowly he stares,at those remains with spite as
a Cadaverous figure in the shadows,remains slient,
Cradling his scythe.


Crit 4 crit.
Last edited by Deadmen at Feb 16, 2008,
#2
man, this sounds like one of them intros to some hard rock song or something in kind of a whisper, it would be sweet for that lol...but great writing skills man
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