#1
Crit4Crit

We're screamo/hardcore i guess, our newest song is blood lust. The recording and the quality's a little rough. The one big prob is i did terrible on teh little solo>> (it was improvised) but the rest was decent so we decided to put it up. Also today would be the 3rd week we've been a full band. Click lyrics if you can't understand it.

www.myspace.com/nightmaretheory1
#2
firstly, nice work. just a couple of problems. guitar tone is way too trebly - it's pretty hard to hear the actual notes. maybe fatten the tone and take off a tiny bit of distortion. also, the bass is a bit tinny. again, i'd probably add a bit more bass and mid on the amp. a proper recording would obviously do the song a lot more justice. other than that, good work. the title of the song is very fitting haha.

i'd appreciate it if you critiqued my song:
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=787625
#3
Its definetely a bit difficult with how low the quality is. Your verses are fine, but don't you think the topic is a bit overdone/corny. Like I get it your pissed lol. Solo needs some work, sounds a bit off of the bass. Some double bass would really add to it!

Don;t you think the chorus is a bit a copy cat of walk by pantera?

Your singer has some lungs!

check mine out:

http://ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=786634
Originally posted by J_Dizzle
THAAAANK YOU GoodCharloteSux is god
#4
Quote by GoodCharloteSux
Its definetely a bit difficult with how low the quality is. Your verses are fine, but don't you think the topic is a bit overdone/corny. Like I get it your pissed lol. Solo needs some work, sounds a bit off of the bass. Some double bass would really add to it!

Don;t you think the chorus is a bit a copy cat of walk by pantera?

Your singer has some lungs!

check mine out:

http://ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=786634

Thanks. Our drummer's double bass coverter for his pearl pedal came in the mail todayx] but he had to work, at least we got a 3 day weekend to mess around with it. And yeah it's pretty close to walk, we do that bend/pull-off thing>>
Last edited by stratkat at Feb 15, 2008,