#1
Upbeat pop punk. About life in general. Tell me what you think.

Verse1:
Life can only go so fast before you lose control and
All the good times come to pass and now you're left alone and
There is nothing you can do to stop this roller coaster
Don't let it end with a bathtub and a toaster now

Verse 2:
And when the master plan falls through what do you do?
Of course you don't wanna be alone, your stories nothing new
Doing everything you can not to be the loser in the end
And when nothing works out you can just pretend

Chorus:
Don't let time pass you by...
Just grab life by the balls and come along for the ride
Don't let time pass you by...
Just grab life by the balls and come along for the ride

Verse 3:
It's like you work so hard just to see things fall apart and
Time just picks you up and throws you right back where you started
So what if we screw up and end up playing all the wrong cards
If everything were as perfect as could be we're trying way to hard

Chorus:
Don't let time pass you by...
Just grab life by the balls and come along for the ride
Don't let time pass you by...
Just grab life by the balls and come along for the ride

Bridge/Outro:
Don't let time pass you by...
Don't let time pass you by...
Don't let time pass you by...
Don't let time pass you by...
#2
sounds good.

do you by any chance listen to A7x?
thier song Unbound is very like this. About growing up and they described it like a Roller Coaster riide!

i like the repeated lyrics at the end, i think theyd sound good going out to a fade with maybe gang vocals!

I deeply regret the 6661 in my username. Siiiigh. Damn you, 14 year old me, you edgy little bastard.