#1
Hey, this is my first song that I'm attempting to write and I've come across a few problems. First, I'm not satisfied with it, so I'd like to hear some opinions. Secondly, I have writer's block I guess because I can't think of where to go from what I have. Right now I'm concerned about what to put after bar 10 (11-13 is just some doodling), and I'd also like to know if bar 2 sounds okay. Feel free to change it up a bit and resend on this thread, thanks a lot.
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Untitled Song.zip
#2
from where you are, start going upwards
then slowly bring it back down

but what you have so far is pretty awesome
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#4
Great acoustic work, It's a beautiful piece, and i didn't found anything wrong in it. About where to go from there, I changed the last chord so you can repeat the transition, or use it as an intro and start the rest of the song from there. Hope it helps.

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edit1.zip
Last edited by rodrigomierh at Feb 16, 2008,