#1
hey, im a "ok" guitar player im not great but i dont suck i just need some help with writing a nirvana style grunge music for my band also if anyone knows what kind of amp would best suite playing grunge music if you need to know what kind of grunge our band plays go to this link http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JUPz3YWXIbI its at that kind of distrotion and singing but i need help for coming up with good riffs and licks thanks for your help
#3
i can give you a tab or to but my band hasnt really uploaded anything or recorded much besides on my mp3 player (were all 13 years old) but heres a tab that ive been working on

e|---------------------------------------------------------------|
B|---------------------------------------------------------------|
G|---------------------------------------------------------------|
D|--33--xxx---55--xxx--2222--0000--3333-0000-------|
A|--33--xxx---55--xxx--2222--0000--3333-0000-------|
E|--33--xxx---55--xxx--2222--0000--3333-0000-------|

thats all i got so far i gatta go ill be back in about an hour or so ill look for the cord for my mp3 player btw my name is zach to lol the song has quite a bit of distortion and other stuff if you need when i get back ill post the lyrics
#4
what the hell ill post them before i go

you cant blame
you cant frame me
desecrate me
then you drown me

i dont care
i dont care
i dont care

leave me alone!

you can save me
you can hate me
you can kill me
but that wont change anything
that wont change anything

you can burn me
you can shoot me
knife in my back
i dont care
i dont care
i dont care

[chorus]

my alumby
my alumni
my past
you angst
my anger
your pranks
leave me alone
leave me alone
leave me alone
my self consiousness
is telling me to leave you
your killing me as the days go by
i dont care
i dont care
i dont care
i dont care!

thats all i got so far i g2g now though peace
#6
I'll crit this before reporting it.

Quote by BittertwistedZa
what the hell ill post them before i go

you cant blame
you cant frame me
desecrate me
then you drown me

Grammar is terrible. Rhyming is way too forced and the words you use have been taken time and time again.

i dont care
i dont care
i dont care

leave me alone!

Is this grunge or emo?

you can save me
you can hate me
you can kill me
but that wont change anything
that wont change anything

Again with the rhyming, and I especially do not like "anything" used as the ending for l3 and l4.

you can burn me
you can shoot me
knife in my back
i dont care
i dont care
i dont care

[chorus]

my alumby
What the hell is an "alumby?" Do you mean alibi?
my alumni
"My alumni"? Wow, cool grudge kid and his prestigious status at school.
my past
you angst
my anger
your pranks
leave me alone
leave me alone
leave me alone
my self consiousness
is telling me to leave you
your killing me as the days go by
i dont care
i dont care
i dont care
i dont care!

This is far too long and you should break it down.

thats all i got so far i g2g now though peace


Honestly, that was terrible. There, I helped you. You need to seriously rethink this or perhaps scrap it all together. Sorry.
#7
You need to read about what each forum here at UG caters to. The post accordingly. The only thing that belongs in S+L is the lyrics.
Filth, pure filth... That's what you are.