#1
I just updated it and added a solo after the main riff.

This is a kind of odd intro I just wrote. It's a little technical death metalish, but it has a dark tone through out most of it. Let me know what you think and I'll do the same for yours.
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Last edited by dethhead at Feb 17, 2008,
#2
not too bad, sort of dissonant and aggressive. i like it. seems a little out-of-key in some parts though.
#3
Quote by hotsnakes
not too bad, sort of dissonant and aggressive. i like it. seems a little out-of-key in some parts though.


Are you talking about the part where it's harmonized in 2nds? Or the part where there's an F minor played with a higher up E minor? I was writing it like that on purpose to add too the dissonance, but if it sounds too off, then I'll probably just change it. Thanks for the crit.
#4
so far
pretty awesome
gonna make some good tech death off of it
only prob is your missing drums to make it reallly good
i cant wait to see this finished, as its already sweet

what are you writing with?
i might be able to help out with those drums

and c4c?http://ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=787860
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#5
Quote by dethhead
Are you talking about the part where it's harmonized in 2nds? Or the part where there's an F minor played with a higher up E minor? I was writing it like that on purpose to add too the dissonance, but if it sounds too off, then I'll probably just change it. Thanks for the crit.

yeah, i would say that it gets just a little too out of key, but don't change it a lot because i like it.

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#7
added midi to it. and gp4, for the heck of it.
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