Not bad considering you've been playing for a year. My advice though is seriously work on your timing, try to play along with the track or get a backing track, it'll help allot. Also turn the gain down on your amp for the right tone, it's a bit too strong for this song. You seem to have the song worked out, you just need to clean it up and work on the timing.
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Thanks a lot. This was just a rough draft for feedback. I'll have another video with a backing track replace it after a week or so. I'll use this thread.