The song is called Lioness in Red and its in my profile. This is a fairly old piece but I just got around to recording it.
So please listen and comment, and if you have any suggestions on how to better the mixing, recording etc. it would be extremely helpful.
Also, be sure to leave a link to your stuff so I can crit it back
Listening as I write...

I liked the intro, it was really serene and sort of abstract and then it blasts you into a screaming torrent of despair and confusion.

The voices really dominated the mix, I wish the guitars were a bit louder and whatnot. From what I could hear of the guitar riffs they weren't anything special, but they were indeed p. heavy and they fit the song. I liked the bridge-ish part you go into at like 1:35 or whatever. Overall I think this song needs a solo, or some sort of part to mix it up because after 2 minutes I was sorta bored ^_^

I'm not a big fan of this genre of metal, but I think that musically this song has potential if you take the guitar parts a little further.

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