It's good, for what you were going for. I usually don't like stuff like that, but it was well-played and fun-sounding, so I liked it alot, actually. Good job! (Btw, you seem young in your pics, how old are you? That's hardcore playing.) You are very talented. =)
I like it. The singer's got a good voice - the only thing that felt quirky was some of the licks in the solo didn't quite feel 'comfortable' if you know what I mean? Nice playing though.
Thanks for the crit, the solo was pretty hard and i messed up a bit in places, and i'm 16.