#1
one of the first songs i ever wrote. grunge/metal. tell me what you think. its about me not liking the doctor's office.

dont like myself
dont like myself
dont like myself
dont like me
dont like my car
dont like my car
dont like my car
dont like it
dont like house
dont like house
dont like house
dont like it

dont...like...it (hitting a chord on those three words)
dont...like...it

wont you leave me be
wont you leave me be
wont you leave me be
wont you leave me
wont you shut your mouth
wont you shut your mouth
wont you shut your mouth
wont you shut it
dont like my shots
dont like my shots
dont like my shots
dont like them

boo...ster...shot
boo...ster...shot
boo...ster...shot
boo...ster...shot
GAS LIST

Z.Vex SHO
AnalogMan Stereo Chorus
Barber Tone Press
Way Huge Supa Puss
#3
Quote by XxGibsonSGxX
It's really not that good.

Repetition is like the plague in this, my word.

I can't comprehend this at all, sorry; needs a rewrite or a trashing.

Mark

I AGREE its complete shartballz garbage
#4
Quote by XxRATMprimusxX
I AGREE its complete shartballz garbage


I'm pretty sure the guy wished you hadn't bumped this due to him not doing it, and the fact you did it just to insult it...
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