you, in bed all day,
talking back to the t.v.
accidental art
love dead like a crushed fly

for those of you who said you'd be interested in hearing my lyrics put to music- I started work on recording an album, if you get in touch with me pm or otherwise I'd be more than happy to fill you in
i like this.

i never really know how to crit haiku. they're so short, and you can't change any words unless they have the same amount of syllables. i guess all i would say is maybe caps the beginning of your sentences. right now its not clear whether the whole thing is one sentence or if accidental art is its own sentence.

this is totally not worth anything, but if you're bored, it would be cool if you could leave a comment on my latest, https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=788785
don't feel like you have to, though. and definately don't full crit it... unless you really want to
when birds flap their wings do the make believe they're really arms?