#1
Conservative Parody of Ten Years After's I'd Love To Change The World.

first thing i've written. c4c of course. and if you know the song, it would help to listen to it at the same time i guess, otherwise the rhyming looks incredibly cheesy lol.
original lyrics
here

Ahem,

welfare's crazy
feed the lazy
it's amazing
that i would keep workin more

raise the tariffs, **** the taxes
wait until
the poor collapses

i'd love to save the world
but it's always about you
always talk but never do

teen abortions, ending lives
but your own neck, slit with knives insanity

global warming, liberal swarming
fearmongerin [don't worry i hate this "rhyme" too ], you'd think the sky is fallin down.

i'd love to save the world
but it's always about you
always talk but never do

self respect
all that matters
think your noble
my world shatters

liberal pigs
ya don't have to heed them
fight for freedom
we dont need em

i'd love to save the world
but i really couldn't care
how society's leeches fair
so i'm leaving it up in the air
what are you gonna do




My mind is going. I can feel it.
#2
yeah man **** the bleeding hearts and their communistic passion.. But srsly, I like the chorus, its a nice summation of ideas into 3 short lines.

For the lines you don't like, what about this :

"Global warming, liberal swarming,"
NO THANKS i WONT BE CONFORMING when the sky is falling down

nice job other than that..